CRITUQUE LADY HERE TO..... CRITIQUE.

What's done right: The facial expression. I love that emotion! A pure fighting spirit. Also, the pose is nicely done, though in TKD, it might leave her open for an attack. And the movement of the clothes and hair is a VERY nice touch.

What needs work: The arms are a bit long, my friend. Her left arm should be just a titch closer to her body, and the foot - the left one, should point out only a little more. Hm.... Oh, the neck deary. Where it connects to the head... it begins to become too thin.

All minor errors that can be fixed with a little erasing ^_^

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"My Bible can beat up your Bible."

It's good all that motion was noticed.

However, this is the point where I thank God that I got this far without destroying it all along the way, and never touch the pencil work again. Putting these in scraps has always been misleading to some, but I don't put the uncolored pencils works in my main gallery. Comments will be kept in mind for future images.

Some specific rejoinders, though:

1) The pose is not based on Tai-Kwon-Do, but is based on real stances (but both hands should be open for what I'm basing it on).
2) The arm coming towads the camera is supposed to be exaggerated for effect, but I didn't make the hand larger than the other one.
3) I can't draw feet.

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"There is no beauty in the flower that is not shared."
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1: TKD is real stances, but as I hear, you're doing karate, right? Then sorry, I was wrong.
2: then make the hand larger ^_^
3: learn?

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"My Bible can beat up your Bible."

2. I'm not editting it and have already stated that, at least not any edits that I can't apply in the digital inking phase (and there will be some of those).
3. I am trying, but feet are weird and quite confounding.

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"There is no beauty in the flower that is not shared."
-Me

Please read Work-Study; it's a tale of Stigmata Holes, Squirrel Armies, Megalomanical Art Teachers, Elite Booze Agents, and MORE!

2: I see
3: I'm one to talk. I cant draw feet at all >>;

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"My Bible can beat up your Bible."

Nice work! I like the character design!!!!

Thank you.

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"There is no beauty in the flower that is not shared."
-Me

Please read Work-Study; it's a tale of Stigmata Holes, Squirrel Armies, Megalomanical Art Teachers, Elite Booze Agents, and MORE!